Thank the Land for the salami!

I have just finished reworking my Tyrelia manuscript, incorporating the feedback from my various Beta reviewers. I’ve enjoyed reading the comments that one of them made. For Chapter 32, where Watcher Rube escapes being brought down by a couple of dogs by throwing a hunk of salami as a distraction, my reviewer wrote in the margin “thank the Land for the salami!” I had a wee giggle. Thanks Gerardine!

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