Tyrelia feedback – part 3

It’s a disaster!

Well, that’s the advice I’ve been given: I need to start my story with a crisis. In fact, I need to start all three story lines each with their own crises. This will mean completely re-writing the first eight chapters of my book. At least.

What crisis would you have a fourteen year old girl encounter, when she’s entered an unknown world all alone?

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